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Teen Poetry #9

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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2010-04-23 05:54 AM

I need you more than ever
I wish I was in your arms
with you holding me
im safe from life's harms

but it time to do some walking
cos its just the whiskey talking

you've never looked so good
as you do right tonight
lost in this moment
nothing feels so right

but it time to do some walking
cos its just the whiskey talking

I miss those nights
fighting in the rain
yelling in anger
how you drove me insane

but it time to do some walking
cos its just the whiskey talking

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2010-04-23 08:59 AM

Whoaa I can really relate..

stargal
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since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2010-05-07 11:14 PM

Hi Hunnie,

In all honesty this reminded me a lot of a country song, or two. It could be because I've been listening to Lady Antebellum, and Reba McEntire for the last few days.

I do understand the sentiment behind it, and can relate. Thanks for sharing.

Stargal

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

3 posted 2010-05-08 12:29 PM

I really like this

WaterFairy103
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since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

4 posted 2010-05-09 03:01 AM

Hunnie! I love this! It's so sad... But it shows an inner strength at the same time, the ability to admit that it's just the whiskey talking. = ] Excellent write.

Don't take life so seriously. It's not permanent.

Rosie_Orange
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since 2009-04-20

Posts 46
South Africa

5 posted 2010-05-09 04:42 AM

love it

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