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Teen Poetry #9

Doves

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30

Posts 360
New Orleans

0 posted 2010-04-16 03:46 AM

Sit on the stone and watch the horizon
Doves purr in natures way of defeating time
Together they come, for one plus one is two
two then becomes three,
Oh how this boy wishes it will forever be,
Tucson heat glitters off the stones much like gold
Rocks gathered like souls in a street
Millions of stories forever untold
A pencil scribbles away on what used to be living
Giving breath into nothing, so now it is living
A tale to soar as long as it can be read
A shame that blind men see as much as dead men are free

"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."

"Hold faithfulness and sincerity as first principles."

-Confucius

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2010-04-23 09:17 AM

Whoa.. epic last few lines dude.

-Zach

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2010-04-23 10:20 AM

Nice

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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