Apathetic, Just Pathetic, Crushed

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Teen Poetry #9

Apathetic, Just Pathetic, Crushed

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-03-26 09:16 PM

My lungs collapse,
my heart caves in.
To save myself from agony,
I wrap myself in apathy.
The dreaded pain,
the endless rain
of a game that I can't win.

My eyes don't work,
I'm bleeding bricks.
To keep myself from feeling sad,
No emotion; good or bad,
Can penetrate,
the padlock gate.
Pain so bad it's just pathetic.

My trembling hands,
the pain-fueled rush.
To keep myself from any feeling
I hide the pain until I'm kneeling
from the pressure,
pains' still fresher.
Just found out and now I'm crushed.

Nothing is more painful that realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

1 posted 2010-03-26 09:17 PM

Oops, sorry I posted that twice. Didn't mean to.
~UNTAMEDelegance

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

3 posted 2010-03-27 01:19 PM

I've never used this one before either. Thank you.
~UNTAMEDelegance

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

4 posted 2010-03-27 05:13 PM

Great write!!! Sad but great! I really enjoyed reading this!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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