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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2010-03-22 06:39 PM


Definitely not the greatest poem I've written, but there was something in me, that had to write it.

The sorry you never got

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

I held your secret
Between the palm of my hands
And you trusted me to keep it safe,
But I just had to let it fly off.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

Mouthing off lies
And half truths.
Oh I just had, Just Had
To find something on you.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

I led you into a house of mirrors,
Said "I love you"
But only to use you
And then throw you away.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

I yelled and screamed
With slurring words.
Too drunk to see
Who I hurt.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

You came from me
Yet I never told you
That I loved you,
Or hugged you like I should.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

To blood and pain,
I brought you to that place.
I let the broken tears
Flow down such a precious face.

You Hate Me,
Yeah… I Know!

I Hate Me, Too!

I'm Sorry!!!

So...
So...

Sorry!
Please forgive me!


(inspired by many poems on these forums, and in other forums)


Bear with each other and forgive whatever grievances you may have against one another. Forgive as the Lord forgave you. (Colossians 3:13)


But I tell you who hear me: Love your enemies, do good to those who hate you, bless those who curse you, and pray for those who mistreat you. (Luke 6:27-28)



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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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2 posted 2010-04-05 10:09 PM


Thanks!!!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

kjsd
Member
since 2010-01-07
Posts 74
sd usa
3 posted 2010-04-08 08:59 PM


asome peom
Bailey
Junior Member
since 2010-04-09
Posts 12
Georgia, US
4 posted 2010-04-09 01:01 PM


This is the first poem I have read since joing and I love it!

Bailey

freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
5 posted 2010-04-09 05:07 PM


Thanks!!!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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