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Teen Poetry #9

Sweet and Low

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2010-02-26 03:11 PM

The title relates nothing to the poem. Lol. I just like it. This poem is suprisenly up beat for what I usually write.

Fingers traced in the sand
The grains stuck under nails
Dreaming of the very day
Where I can spread my sails

I'll fly from shore to shore
The breeze my only guide
I'll be unstoppable
with freedom at my side

Wind tangling in my hair
Basking in the molting sun
The journey's gonna be hard
But I feel I've already won

Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

1 posted 2010-02-26 07:35 PM

i loved this! just reading it had me dreaming of setting free.
great write Zach

-Lee

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2010-02-27 10:11 AM

Thanks Leanne!

That was kinda my motive for my readers. :P

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2010-02-27 03:24 PM

I will wish you happy sailing Zach. Great hope and adventure to come from this poem.

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

4 posted 2010-03-02 03:27 PM

Beautiful

Do you really love me? Or should i just let go now??

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