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Jeremy
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since 2010-01-29
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0 posted 2010-02-07 10:55 PM




I lost you among the howling rains
Alone, left with the world’s pains
I searched the night and the day
But once again, I’m left astray

I scaled the mountains of lost hope
At its peak, sat life’s rope
He motioned me toward past regrets
Tempted to lay him on my neck
Exhausted, it seemed wise to obey
But came a voice that led me away

Following the voice to the forest of acceptance
There a knife offered repentance
Lusting Blood, her one desire
Dealing renewal, so I may aspire
Ready to end it, knife pressed to my skin
But then, the sudden voice led me again

Through the ruins of betrayal
I came across a weary sentinel
He held the capsule of my shame
The antidote to my every bane
Savoring the answer to my prayer
I heard the voice, but I did not care

Collapsed to the ground
Not one sound
But yet again, came the interruption
That woke me in a vile eruption
Out my mouth, poured my OD
That signaled my distrust in me
Overwhelming anger and distrust
Was silenced by the voice’s hush

It led me to tranquility
And promised me serenity
It bestowed upon me, family and friends
Companions till the very end
It renewed me from the inside out
And washed away my every doubt
I thought I lost you in the rain
Through the trials and the pain
But not even the howls of their temptations
Could quiet your voice and revelations

Thank You God


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