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Teen Poetry #9

Sunrise

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-01-19 11:12 AM

The silence of
a morning still;
the sky-strung embers
of stars still clinging
to night that fades
with the sunlight's will
and sets the morning
fires to singing.

The ebony pitch that
fades to grey,
then palest pink
of young-rose hue
that fuels the blaze
of morning's break
and heals the world
with morn' anew.

unfinishedlife
Junior Member

since 2010-03-06

Posts 22

1 posted 2010-03-07 01:26 PM

Very beautiful descriptions....
I would like to read something from you that is about a topic that is not necessarily pretty to begin with until it is thought of in a differnent way than it is normally seen...just an idea.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2010-03-19 01:43 AM

Lovely write!!!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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