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The last verse
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The last verse |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I charge at ya crew like a ragining rhino, See you running, fumbling like a wino, In this battlefield of life, I command immense power, God may be in the front, but I am his rival, Rolling up always in first place, Leaving you and your crew in a hearse, Blazin your soul with the fiery flames of the Sun, I obliterate civilized nations just for fun, Moving through time, as I own a time machine, Creating history and future and the same time, Feel the passion of Christ in each of my rhyme, Not letting you get an ounce of time, Murder is all that follow this rhyme, You and the dirt unite one last time, Going in, ending you with one hit, One strike, and it’s your demise. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
"Pleased to meet you hope you guess my name" Stones often come to mind when I read stuff in this forum. 88's friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Not sure I understand your response. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Has anyone ever asked you to explain your writing? If so, it's not your writing. After all, you knew exactly what was going on in your mind while you were writing. Myself? I like clarity blended with a dash of ambiguity and a pinch of oxymoronic dribble. Look at it this way, at least you got a hit which you hadn't had in a long time. Not the analytical one (the guessing part where I try to 'get your meaning') you may have wanted, but a hit nevertheless. Savor it. 88's She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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