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Dark Poetry #5

The Reaper's Persuasion

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-02-22 07:30 PM

it is easier for me to live
amongst the dead
than it is to die
surrounded by the living

for the living
care not for my ashes
that fall through
the grate of my sorrows

still as the shadow of death envelops me
the light of your love shines through
and I ask for no further redemption
than one lasting embrace from you

Touch, but don't look

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-02-23 08:26 AM

With a shade of dark, followed by a dedicated love.

Fine, articulated poetry Jack.

...just bein' Bluesy

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2014-03-08 01:05 AM

You have posts everywhere. Pleased I decided to do some exploring tonight.

I really felt the words of this one! I haven't quite decided if that is good or bad

but great poem!

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