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Dark Poetry #5

Dead Flowers

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-01-14 08:54 PM

Were your
stems not
strong enough
to hold
your gentle petals?

Was your
earthen residence
not a comfort
to you?

Have you now
found peace
where a fairy's wings
might flutter?

Do
you
still
think
of me?

...just bein' Bluesy

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2014-01-23 04:39 PM

This tears my heart apart, dear Max. It is beautifully sad.

Margherita

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2014-02-03 09:39 PM

I very much appreciate your sentiment. This was written during a period of despondency that many others may also relate to.

We're human, and you and I both are familiar with a wide spectrum of experiences that are sometimes revealed in the words we write.

Many bright blessings to you.

Regards from Bluesy

...just bein' Bluesy

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

3 posted 2014-04-01 11:54 PM

Awww. It is sad. I hope it had a happy ending.

To call oneself a poet is a vain remark indeed. After you're dead, let others eulogize you as such if they feel you are worthy.

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