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Dark Poetry #5

First Post in two years

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2009-02-12 02:10 AM

I have been away
but now am back
I know it's only
for the one girl
It seems like everytime
I think of her
I come here
its been years-
damn-
should have dead those fears-
Sorry-
my first attempt to
write in over two years

nina1522
Member

since 2009-02-14

Posts 189

1 posted 2009-02-14 10:28 PM

i enjoyed reading this. i just posted my first poem ever so i am also cautios and wearry of posting a poem.

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

2 posted 2009-02-15 05:37 AM

I enjoyed this poem.

Rkcraig and Nina, don't be cautious or wary of posting your poems. This is a friendly society of poets, not a board of bloodless critics. Any criticism given will be in good faith and will help you grow as writers.

Bobby had to point out the difference between a senryu and a haiku to me the other day. So don't fret, just write from the heart.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

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