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Into Ruins |
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raspberry89 New Member
since 2013-03-28
Posts 2USA |
How can I define to you in a rhyme My pain, melodically, nurtured by time How can I make anyone feel what I feel When all I know are lies, how can I make this real Let me bring you down with me As we walk through the fires, tell me what you see Give me 18 years to destroy your worth I'll be in your brain til you regret your birth Let me throw you to the lions blindfolded Stand your ground, see how long you can hold it Let me sully all that surrounds you You'll thank God for the worst you've been through Only when your life hinges on hiding like I hid Will you be capable of knowing pain like I did |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This is amazing, I absolutely love it. It is easily one of my favorite poems I have read for quite a while. Thank you for sharing, it was beautiful and powerful and I love it. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Profound darkness seeps through this. The (intangible to all others) grief you've experienced is excellently displayed. Nicely done. Michael |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Very good Poem. Channel whatever you feel in your writing and you will look back years from now and will be surprised how well you have captured your emotions. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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