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maddorani
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0 posted 2012-10-21 07:37 PM


You are my unintended.
You were unplanned for.
I didn’t expect you to come.
I didn’t expect you to come
Into my life.-
You supported me.
You healed me.
You mended the
Broken me.
That used to live its life
In pieces.
You gave me that
Hope .
When no one can.-
I am grateful.
That I have you.
You took me out
From my suffering.
You brought colors
Into my life.
You listened to me
And brought me
Out of my shell.-
Somehow you
Just made me
Feel happier
When others couldn’t.-
You extended my life.
When I was about to give up.-
Now you are my life.
My everything
Whom who I
Always wished for.-
You are my unintended.
You were unplanned for .
You came unintentionally.
You came unexpectedly.
And you are the one
Who I will always
Love.-


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1 posted 2013-04-04 11:26 PM


I hope this poem is penned with someone in mind and that something is still part of your life. Good write. Keep up the good work.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

maddorani1991
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since 2013-03-21
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2 posted 2013-05-06 05:25 PM


sorry for the late rep um i really don have anyone in my mind this poem was inspired by the muse song named unintended i can relate to the feeling
Angela Hauser
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3 posted 2015-06-10 06:06 PM


Beautifully written! The unexpected surprise of the love we all long for. I can almost imagine that this was written from the point of view of the object of the NIN song Fragile.
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