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Dark Poetry #5

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LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2012-03-04 07:49 PM

            You think you know what's best
          for her, but not the rest.
        So sinking down
      a suffering sound
    uttered from those pouty lips,
  mesmerized by swinging hips--
you try to make it okay,
but all she does is decay;
mind tearing and heart burning
  tables turning--
    spinning her away,
    trying to convince her to stay.
    You fall to your knees
  and whisper hopeless pleas
when all she needs
comes when she simply bleeds.
Ignore her silly screams
caused by belligerent dreams
  that mean no good, only harm,
    tremors violently shaking her arm
      as you whisper empty promises
        accompanied by tight lipped kisses
          because you think you know what's best.
            But it's only for her, not the rest.

noodles6996
New Member

since 2012-06-16

Posts 7

1 posted 2012-06-16 03:25 AM

been on both sides of that D: both are fun at first, then everything just crashes and burns so painfully hot

MetalRose
New Member

since 2012-06-18

Posts 9
Ventura, Ca

2 posted 2012-06-18 01:32 PM

Wow this is amazing . I love how your words just flowed through my mouth. So deep and meaningful. I absolutely loved it.

Veronica Morales

MetalRose
New Member

since 2012-06-18

Posts 9
Ventura, Ca

3 posted 2012-06-18 04:39 PM

Hmm...I thought I posted here...anywho. love this poem absolutely amazing . Keep up the good work

Veronica Morales

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