Dark Poetry #5 |
The Fallen One |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Far from the light in ebon night The shadows stretch their claws Down on my knees I reach for the keys To open up Hell’s doors Torches blaze in a stygian haze Of acrid stinging smoke The roar of the fire the great central pyre In the darkness I choke Misery was born when my wings were torn And my halo was stripped The fate of the proud hurled from the clouds By a divine edict But my wings grew anew in raven hue Fallen I was named To eat of the dead in this place of dread I not God was blamed Afar from the sun the fallen one Cast out for my sin I fell from above for a woman’s love The true heaven within As the prophets say I will wait for the day When I will rise again To reap what they sow a herald of woe And vindicate my pain As we conquer above I will meet my love In sinful ecstasy The old world will die and we will arise To begin a dynasty Ooo, I haven't written something this dark in ages. Hehe. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Desirer4New Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art |
very beautiful |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thank you. It's about time the dark forum got some love. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
"But my wings grew anew in raven hue Fallen I was named To eat of the dead in this place of dread I not God was blamed Torches blaze in a stygian haze Of acrid stinging smoke The roar of the fire the great central pyre In the darkness I choke" Ayo, ill... I feel the dark passion in this poem. The visuals go hard as hell in this piece. Good to see your still puttin down fire, Cleave |
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~~Silver Wolf~~ New Member
since 2009-02-18
Posts 4 |
Wow, that was one of the best dark poems I have read so far. Alot of feeling in it. Great work! ~~Silver Wolf~~ |
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pennylane New Member
since 2009-02-19
Posts 1Australia |
hi Im new to the forum... just wanted to say i love this it is dark but lovely, very touching... |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thanks Penny, and welcome to PiP! Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
You never cease to amaze Luke. -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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Quail New Member
since 2009-02-22
Posts 9 |
WOW WOW WOW! amazing there are words that describe this but I lost them, Misery was born when my wings were torn That right there speaks to me GREAT |
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