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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
You've made me sigh, You've made me cry, you've made my rage grow beyond this age reach far beyond its cage. its all a blur, of cold warm air it's all just too much to bear, someday ill just cease to care and ill let it all just burn to hell and let the deadly breeze freeze it all eternally. someday ill just cease to care, someday ill just cease to care, and if it pleases you i'll leave this gory nightmare this cold imperial darkness all to you, because i can't stand this air, can't stand your cold warm air, i'll leave leave this night to you i'll leave because you've made me cry, you've made me sigh, you've made me want to let it just burn to hell, and ask myself so many countless whys? but now I've ceased to care you've made me sigh, you've made me cry, simply just far too much i altered this a bit from my rough draft so idk how it may be yolilitzli |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This is an angry little poem, resentful and demanding. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This is an angry little poem, filled with remorse and resentment, I loved the feeling it gave off-- it was powerful and strong. |
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