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pyre
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0 posted 2009-02-02 12:16 PM


The scent of raw fish
What a delicious dish
When bills are unpaid
I'll feast on fish
Until we've been frayed
Where Death's breath has made
Silent 2 fish
Temporary on dish

Does she pray, or am I prey?  
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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
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1 posted 2009-02-17 01:40 PM

I don't know what you were trying to say here, but what I got was something about money matters and and how it's only temperary? Can't say, but I liked reading this anyways, I love it when I'm forced to think :-) Good write.
pyre
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2 posted 2009-03-01 07:47 PM

its about sack love.

Does she pray, or am I prey?  
pyre
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3 posted 2010-02-21 10:36 PM

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