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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
Black and white With a bit of red Anger and rage Hateful prudent spite Wishing of the dead Bit of a twisted cage Keep twisting Get out Be free of that coffen Mesh over weave Breathable coffen Destroying me Beautiful coffen Convey the truth to me Let me know if the nails hurt Center me over you I'll make those nails hurt Thick and rich Nails struck by the world Don't try to understand Just accept that you can't And keep going Just keep going Does she pray, or am I prey? |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
For a piece so dark, I must say I enjoyed the last stanza the best... inspirational. |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
"Black and white With a bit of red Anger and rage Hateful prudent spite Wishing of the dead Bit of a twisted cage Keep twisting Get out Be free of that coffen Mesh over weave Breathable coffen Destroying me Beautiful coffen" I like the wordplay used in this piece. you deffo are gettin better! - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
Thank you. Business suits freak me out a bit. pyre Does she pray, or am I prey? |
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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
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