will i ever get to see you again?

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Dark Poetry #5

will i ever get to see you again?

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-11-02 03:00 PM

Will I ever get to see you (again)?
Will I get to be with you (again)?-
I remember my last goodbye to you
I remember my last day with you-
I want to see you again!
I want to be with you again!
Its killing me inside
Its becoming intolerable-
How many days has it been?
How many months has it been?
How many years has it been?
Just….how many!?-
How long are you intending to make me wait?
Just how…..long?-
Why can’t you see this desire?
Why can’t you see inside my heart?-
Why are you punishing me?
Why are you afflicting me?
Why….-
The feeling of wanting to see you
Again and again
Is filling up
My heart .-
The feeling of wanting to be with you
More and more
Is filling up my heart.-
My heart is getting greedy
Each and everyday .-
Why can’t you comprehend my heart?
Why can’t you apprehend my heart?
Why….?-
I want to see you (again)!
I want to be with you (again)!-
I just want you
Only…..you!-
Sometimes I wonder
If I will ever get to see you (again)!?
If I will ever get to be with you (again)!?

LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2011-11-06 08:41 PM

Very interesting set up, I like how you've made it all broken up and choppy. Heartfelt and truthful, great job.

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2011-11-07 01:47 AM

thanks

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2012-08-10 12:57 PM

love can be desperation...and i feel the way you set this poem up conveys that well...that urgent longing

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

4 posted 2012-08-10 04:01 AM

hehe thanks but to tell u the truth i never had a boyfriend nor a lover

muted

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5 posted 2012-08-11 01:06 AM

I believe that love exists in all of us as a primal instinct .... Even without a lover or boyfriend you can still feel the desperation of wanting

byski
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since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-09-18 04:19 AM

I enjoyed it very much thanks. Sounded like a rant spoken toward a wall, alone. I was thinking while reading; just get it out there, let the emotion fall where it may is what you intended.

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

7 posted 2012-09-18 02:32 PM

thanks

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