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are you a memory
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are you a memory |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
Are you a memory? Do you even exist?- When I try to touch your face I can’t feel anything. When I reach toward your hand I can’t reach it As if you’re somewhere Far away- I try to catch up to you by Hastening and pacing Breathlessly, panicking, Anxiously just to see If you are a memory Or not Just to see if you Exist or not- But the more I catch up To you The further you go The more I come closer The more distant you become- Please stop! I want to see you Please stop! I don’t want you to become A memory Please stop! I want you to exist- Please stop! Please stop! Please stop! Can’t you see? How I’m lagging behind? Can’t you see? How I’m desperate? Can’t you see? How despondent I am? Can’t you see? How my feet are being tainted? Can’t you see? How my dress is disintegrating? Just like me! Can’t you turn back? And look for once Please stop!?- I want you to Look me in the eye Touch my face Hold my hand To confirm If you exist Or if you Are just a memory That I am trying To find Within my heart |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
The way you have written these words makes it move like a frantic mind, and it give the poem that much more value and detail. Wonderful job, I always love your poems. |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thank you  |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
loved the dress disintegrating part and the poem in itself yolilitzli |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thank you |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
So I actually enjoyed this, in all my years of writing, I to can relate to this poem having feelings towards someone like this, however after all my years of wanting to be with him, I finally am! Things will look up just stay positive, like a friend has always told me! Execellant write though! Kate |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thanks its so rare for people to be loved by the same person that they have always loved not so many ppl are lucky like u i wish u guys the happiness and hopefully u guys will get married too |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Love is such a fickle thing and men even more so....lol. You think you find what it is you need and suddenly it is gone for no apparent reason. |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
haha the thing is i never believed in love |
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