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Stitches
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since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
United Kingdom
0 posted 2011-09-28 06:30 AM


Freeze these moments.
Let there be no time.
Just sound and form,
Locked in the mind.

Let us beat through lazy hours-
to which the clocks are blind,
It is the thrum of peace
that I will never find.

Deafen me with a neverending harmony
as our bodies burn all time away.
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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-12-04 04:17 PM

I love your twist on time. Playing with the concept of time is always interesting to me, although I'm not completely sure why.
Stitches
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since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
United Kingdom
2 posted 2011-12-04 04:19 PM

Thanks.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2012-01-08 03:57 AM

very interesting piece, I enjoyed this

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing
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