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Dark Poetry #5

Left No Choice

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-09-17 09:49 AM

The monster in me
wants to be free,
wants to kill,
wants to tear,
wants to blood to spill
and to spread despair.

I cage in the beast;
on my insides he feasts
leaving me an empty shell
burning down down to Hell.

This monster inside
I no longer can hide,
yet I do not mind
because I find
that this monster in me
is all I can be.

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

1 posted 2011-09-19 07:06 PM

amazing

Haf_Alive
Member

since 2011-09-04

Posts 56
High in the Sky

2 posted 2011-09-21 12:45 PM

this made me think of my own situation, it feels like somewhere i've written this about myself... but didn't... if that makes sense. i can't stop reading it! i love it.

HAF

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

3 posted 2011-09-21 08:55 PM

Thank you, and I know exactly what you mean. Sometimes you find words and they just fit, they click. I've had many poems do that and it is always an amazing feeling.

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