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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2011-09-11 08:09 PM


stop crying please your hurting me,
your tears they taste so bittersweet
with a hint of saltiness to match,
stop crying please your hurting me,
stop the running waterfall
for a moment and simply talk to me,
please dont run away,
im with you dont you see?
youre never alone dont you know?
let me in i beg of thee
and in response you turn away
saying: what do you know about me
and leave me there feeling all forlorn.

yolilitzli

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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-11-05 10:52 AM


This is another very well conceived poem! That is a problem I've always had, being able to come up with new concepts and ideas, yet you do it brilliantly and so simply! You have talent, keep writing.
ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
2 posted 2011-11-05 03:51 PM


thank you im planning to post another one up soon
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