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Dark Poetry #5

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ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2011-09-11 08:09 PM

stop crying please your hurting me,
your tears they taste so bittersweet
with a hint of saltiness to match,
stop crying please your hurting me,
stop the running waterfall
for a moment and simply talk to me,
please dont run away,
im with you dont you see?
youre never alone dont you know?
let me in i beg of thee
and in response you turn away
saying: what do you know about me
and leave me there feeling all forlorn.

yolilitzli

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2011-11-05 10:52 AM

This is another very well conceived poem! That is a problem I've always had, being able to come up with new concepts and ideas, yet you do it brilliantly and so simply! You have talent, keep writing.

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

2 posted 2011-11-05 03:51 PM

thank you im planning to post another one up soon

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