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Dark Poetry #5

My Traitorous Messengers

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-09-08 08:35 PM

Sometimes I want to break out into screams
for it feels I'm being pulled apart at my seams
but I fear the consequence of my voice,
I feel it may rid me of any future choice.
Yet the words I lock up twist and tear
with only one thought, with only one care.
They want to be heard,
and to them it had never occurred
that their simple utterance could destroy my life
so they continue cutting at me like an ugly, dull knife.
So I bite my tongue and whimper quietly,
sitting here in complete agony
for I wish to say, I wish to tell
but I fear that my words would send me to Hell.

rachel_anubis
Junior Member

since 2011-03-24

Posts 43

1 posted 2011-09-08 11:08 PM

I really loved this poem. It captured such feeling. Amazing

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

2 posted 2011-09-11 08:11 PM

i like your poems

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

3 posted 2011-09-14 09:17 PM

amazing i love your writing skills

Swisha
Junior Member

since 2009-07-22

Posts 32

4 posted 2011-09-24 12:28 PM

Very Nice, I see alot of people try to write like this and they seem to force the rhymes, but this flows perfect and doesn't disrupt the story/message/poem.
Love it.

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