Dark Poetry #5 |
My Traitorous Messengers |
LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Sometimes I want to break out into screams for it feels I'm being pulled apart at my seams but I fear the consequence of my voice, I feel it may rid me of any future choice. Yet the words I lock up twist and tear with only one thought, with only one care. They want to be heard, and to them it had never occurred that their simple utterance could destroy my life so they continue cutting at me like an ugly, dull knife. So I bite my tongue and whimper quietly, sitting here in complete agony for I wish to say, I wish to tell but I fear that my words would send me to Hell. |
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rachel_anubis Junior Member
since 2011-03-24
Posts 43 |
I really loved this poem. It captured such feeling. Amazing |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
i like your poems |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
amazing i love your writing skills |
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Swisha Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32 |
Very Nice, I see alot of people try to write like this and they seem to force the rhymes, but this flows perfect and doesn't disrupt the story/message/poem. Love it. |
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