an observation in literal haiku form

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an observation in literal haiku form

easy1
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0 posted 2011-07-16 03:22 PM

drugged-being-nightmares
by-hellbound-fools-are-no-fun
yet-from-dreams-waking

easy1
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since 2010-05-22

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Southeastern USA

1 posted 2011-08-06 01:49 PM

Not much going on in this topic, so I shall answer my own "proto-haiku" with a "sort of tanka"...

Twice in two weeks I
came through, then twenty years of
painful servitude.

What is there to understand?
Liberty, freedom, justice?

LOL, one could title that something like "The Pledge", if a title is fervently desired. Yet the words stand on their own.

Poets do not shoot fish in barrels, we woo them---and the barrels, too.

easy1
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since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2011-08-10 01:09 PM

Too many morons
stumbling around just looking
for someone to hate.

Despise my Okie disguise,
moron. Someday you'll be wise.

- copyright 2011 Mark C.

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