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JazminTheBurningSoul
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since 2009-01-25

Posts 1

0 posted 2009-01-25 08:15 AM

I feel like my body is screaming;
Nobody sees my pain;
I seem okay on the out side;
But on the inside all I have is rage;
My lungs are burning;
Tears are ice;
If I scream will anybody hear me?
I need help;
Nobody listens;
I'm a lone sole in this world;
Looking for a way to find a home;

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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-01-25 09:17 AM

Congratulations on your first post and welcome.

I thought your poem was very effective at conveying a sense of anguish and isolation.

On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2009-01-25 10:09 PM

fits me well. great poem
midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

3 posted 2009-01-28 03:02 PM

Great piece! I can relate to this so well. Keep up the good work.

Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23

Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

4 posted 2009-02-09 06:21 PM

i can relate to this very well..thank youfor sharing this...its very good.. nice write

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