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Dark Poetry #5

My Nightmare

rachel_anubis
Junior Member

since 2011-03-24

Posts 43

0 posted 2011-05-23 06:56 AM

Welcome to my nightmare,
Here the fear is real,
I want you to stay,
So that I can feel,
The terror writhing in your mind,
The fear that boils your blood
The scream that passes through your lips
The blood that drenches still,
As you stumble through the streets,
You hear a ravens call,
It is plain what it is saying,
Though you only feel,
You still know where you are,
But not where you shall be,
Welcome to my nightmare,
Here you are to stay.

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

1 posted 2011-05-23 10:36 PM

nice i enjoyed it

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

2 posted 2011-09-08 01:41 AM

I really liked this

I like the rhyme

keep writing

M

My pen is the barrel of a gun. Remind me which side you should be on.

HeliaHeart
Member

since 2008-11-16

Posts 53
Georgia

3 posted 2011-09-28 04:44 PM

This is nice... the imagery tries to reel you in

keep it up!

~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

4 posted 2011-10-02 09:10 AM

i really liked this, thanks for sharing..

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

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