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| Dark Poetry #5 |
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the desert |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
The sun is blazing I can see the clear blue sky And I am out here in this Brown sandy desert I keep on walking barefoot As I go further and further My feet start to burn I ‘m getting thirsty And even more thirstier Along the way there Is nothing to quench my thirst And as I go further I only see mirages I make my pace Quicker and quicker But this heat is so Dangerous that It’s making me darker It is making me sweat I can’t even feel a wind Everything is so dead around me As if it feels like I have been Abandoned and isolated As if I have been thrown away And I ask myself How can I leave from here? How can I find the exit? I can’t leave from here I can’t find the exit Because this is just like A maze I keep on going And going can’t find my Way and its making me Befuddled instead I just Stop walking and pacing Instead I just lay down And sleep in the desert Till eternity and let the Sand bury me So that no one would Find me and let god Take me away peacefully With my eyes closed And let me be perished |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
This is pretty well-written! Your words remind me of accounts of some people who have either died (obviously "conjectured" accounts) or barely escaped while trekking Death Valley in California with no buddies and too little water during the heat of the day. |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thank you i wrote it of the way how i felt so i put the desert in my poem hehe and so how it looks i wanted to let out my feelings and so i did i keep my feelings bottled up but i let it out by writing poetry hehe and thank you for your praise i appreciate it |
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