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Monsters in my core
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Monsters in my core |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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The monsters of the night have invaded my very core, I see them right now on this beautiful day, This is no ordinary observation, Don’t reserve yourself from this tale, Wait, wait a minute, before you conclude, Don’t assume to preclude these thoughts as worthless, Hear me out for just a few more lines, I pen them just for your eyes, So back to the tale of the monsters that have come, Each of them taunts me just to have some fun, How can I help you? You may ask, Others may just give me a pass, No one can ignore me or leave me behind, For I am your voice, crying inside, Feel that tremor from time to time, Wondering what is the cause this time? It is those monsters, who invaded my core, They are now bored, and need a new shore, Don’t be like an island, give them some hope, You will get your chance to play this joke, Time will come when you will pen the same words, And others will read and you will feel no more hurt. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
As I posted on your other poem I am impressed by the rhythm of your words. The only suggestion I have is don't force your words together, sometimes they don't fit. But I loved the story you have here and I feel your emotions. |
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