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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
My tears are dropping In a crystallized like form My tears just keep on Overflowing like a river No matter how much I cry The agony won’t subside No matter how much I cry The result will be the same Sometimes I think to myself What’s the point of these tears? What’s the point of crying? Because these tears don’t have a value Because these tears aren’t precious Like valuable pearls I ask myself Why do I cry? Why do I suffer? When no one notices When no one sees When no one comprehends This oppressed heart of mine Asking myself Why?! Why?! Oh why Am I crying nonstop? Why my tears are overflowing nonstop? Is crying the only solution that I have got? Is there anything that I can do? Can’t anyone see how I’m falling apart? Can’t anyone see these tears that don't have any value? No one can see how I’m falling apart Because they are oblivious No one can see my tears that have no avail Because to them these tears are opaque and vague |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
A moving write and a heartfelt cry (pardon the pun, please). For a title I would half in jest suggest "Water of Life"... and then truly suggest a reading or rereading of The Neverending Story.  |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thank you |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This reminds me of one of my poems, good job I enjoyed it! |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thank you i took your advice as you can see |
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