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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-05-02 09:42 PM



My tears are dropping
In a crystallized like form
My tears just keep on
Overflowing like a river
No matter how much I cry
The agony won’t subside
No matter how much I cry
The result will be the same
Sometimes I think to myself
What’s the point of these tears?
What’s the point of crying?
Because these tears don’t have a value
Because these tears aren’t precious
Like valuable pearls
I ask myself
Why do I cry?
Why do I suffer?
When no one notices
When no one sees
When no one comprehends
This oppressed heart of mine
Asking myself
Why?!
Why?!
Oh why
Am I crying nonstop?
Why my tears are overflowing nonstop?
Is crying the only solution that I have got?
Is there anything that I can do?
Can’t anyone see how I’m falling apart?
Can’t anyone see these tears that don't have any value?
No one can see how I’m falling apart
Because they are oblivious
No one can see my tears that have no avail
Because to them these tears are opaque and vague

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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2011-05-02 11:47 PM


A moving write and a heartfelt cry (pardon the pun, please). For a title I would half in jest suggest "Water of Life"... and then truly suggest a reading or rereading of The Neverending Story.
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-05-03 12:47 PM


thank you
LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
3 posted 2011-05-03 09:02 PM


This reminds me of one of my poems, good job I enjoyed it!
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
4 posted 2011-05-03 09:27 PM


thank you i took your advice as you can see
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