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my heart has been gouged out
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my heart has been gouged out |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
i am not new here but this is my first post in dark poetry i hope you all enjoy it I am becoming Pallid, lurid and Frail because my heart Has been gouged out and My blood is oozing Out of the hole making A crimson river Of blood that keeps on Flowing and glistening I am here just lying Down and being drenched in My own blood because I can’t move, crawl, Walk or sit I only Can remorsefully watch My blood oozing out of The hole and think about My hideous memories And how it felt when People trampled over My feelings and made it Into a wounded heart But then reality Strikes me when I smell The stench of my own Blood making me Suffocate making my Eyes burn and slowly they Are closing away Giving me a hint that My own death is Approaching me yet I desire to be saved And be free but I can’t Because I can’t walk Or move around and Yet I still wish for Someone to come but No one would come and if A person does come then I would be gone by Then and I will be Perished and that person Would see is my skeleton With my heart missing |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Wow, that is emotional. I am interested by the line breaks, they seem to have no reason but they some how make it seem broken and bleeding, just like the heart. Very good words yet I think the set up could be better, but all in all I love it. |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thank you i really appreciate it |
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