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Dark Poetry #5

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LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-03-27 09:29 PM

Dreams are torn and hopes, they burn. Down, down to dust that floats away on the endless wind. Away from love, away from peace, away from all people who are in need. But in the end, does it matter? Doesn't it all just go away, like the burned dreams on the wind? Words, they should mean something. They should be powerful, filled with meaning and purpose. Mine run in circles, crying and wailing because they can not get it right. Words should move people, make them see the wrong, the pain, and influence them to help make it right. Mine discourage even the strongest minds, torture even. Why is that? Why are my words always twisted, mangled, deformed creatures that cower away from hope and peace? They never work for me, they do not tell my real feelings, the right words never come, they are awkward letters forced together unhappily. Just like me.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-03-27 10:45 PM

" Words, they should mean something. They should be powerful, filled with meaning and purpose."

There is little more to say. Splendid, Sarah. Keep ripping these out, please.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

2 posted 2011-03-28 01:48 AM

Very powerful meaning.

Lost & wondering till I'm found

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

3 posted 2011-03-28 01:48 AM

Very powerful meaning.

Lost & wondering till I'm found

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