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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
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Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-02-27 09:31 PM



This is not so much of a poem, it is more of just writing.
What do you see when you close your eyes?
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The black scorched ground steams silently as I cautiously take step after step towards it, the only thing here other than me for miles after miles of nothing. Charcoaled arms reach up to the sky, making it appear to be praying in a twisted, mangled form of worship. The blood red sky illuminates the burned bark and sends red lines sparkling across the scorched surface. Black clouds cross over the sun as I tentatively reach out my hand. The red sun glows from behind the cover of the oppressive clouds and an eery, misty red shade is cast down to earth. Fingertips gentily caress the tree's burned skin, leaving a fine, black dust on the tips of my fingers.

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
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1 posted 2011-03-24 03:49 PM


This is dark and beautiful writing. So beautiful. I recommend more of this, even if not here in this forum, but hopefully so.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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