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Dark Poetry #5

Time

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-02-27 09:21 PM

      Tick tock goes the clock
   making my day dissolve away.
                  The sun
                             sinks
                                     down
   as the world goes round,
like the hand of the ticking clock.
         Dispair, it stares, its eyes not shy
               you know that I--
                                        I fade.
                                        I fade as the
                                                           sun
                                                                goes
                                                                      down
and the clock hands go round
                taunting my frantic mind.
                                The ticking of time--
                                                              it tocks.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2011-03-22 09:47 PM

Very well done. I always enjoy the topic of time; whether it been in a poem, song, or story. =)

Nice write,

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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-03-22 09:57 PM

Amazing and excellent work!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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