Dark Poetry #5 |
Etching |
littlemonster Junior Member
since 2010-05-06
Posts 39UK |
I carve her wings on my back, drawing delicate lines etched in guilt. A faint trace of all I know still all I cannot say. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Wow, that is really powerful. I loved how you kept the poem short and simple, yet it held so much meaning. Very elegant. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ahh, LaGraceLa! Do you not know? This Little Monster is the Queen of such impactful compact's. There is no one like her in the poetry world. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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