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Dark Poetry #5

Etching

littlemonster
Junior Member

since 2010-05-06

Posts 39
UK

0 posted 2011-02-12 04:47 AM

I carve her wings
on my back,
drawing delicate lines
etched in guilt.

A faint trace
of all I know
still all I cannot say.

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2011-02-13 09:57 AM

Wow, that is really powerful. I loved how you kept the poem short and simple, yet it held so much meaning. Very elegant.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-03-22 09:46 PM

Ahh, LaGraceLa! Do you not know? This Little Monster is the Queen of such impactful compact's. There is no one like her in the poetry world.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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