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Britt_Brat
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since 2008-03-05
Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

0 posted 2011-02-08 10:38 PM


   Your standing right in front of me, and it seems you're a hundred miles away. In a place I am forbidden to enter. Staring through a glass door reaching for you. Wishing to hold your hand to know you are real and not a dream I have been dreaming.
  
   Just a tiny fragile door standing in front of me, but I can't knock it down. Reaching for your love. Doing all I can to make you the happiest man alive. Reaching for the man I once knew, and who loved without so much complications. Reaching for your love once again. Only to be the victim of a cruel heart who doesn't know what they want any more. Leaving me to keep reaching for him till he finds what he wants  

Lost & wondering till I'm found

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LaGraceLa
Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-02-10 10:09 PM


Beautiful.
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-03-22 11:47 PM


A great write describing a not so great moment. Very well done.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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