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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-02-03 06:02 PM



you tell me i cant.
you tell me i never will.
and who am i to say youre wrong?
maybe
i cant.
maybe
i never will.
thats what you tell me over and
over.
it makes sence i guess.
i cant remember
the last
time
i was right.
so why should i think
i can change what
you think? simple,
i cant.
i am always wrong. nothing that
i do ever helps. nothing i do
is right.
so you
tell me i cant. you tell me i never will.
and youre right.
i cant.
i never will.

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1 posted 2011-02-03 06:47 PM


I figure if you get a mindset that you can, you will!  If you think you can't you will never be disappointed.

A message for people to surely think about in your poem

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-02-03 11:36 PM


I understand this.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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