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JenniferMaxwell
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0 posted 2008-12-29 06:37 AM


no escape

wall them in to keep them out
blow them up to put them down
sort them out with bombs and bullets -
whose eye is on the sparrow?

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1 posted 2008-12-29 06:41 AM


lol.
For a small poem. that has a large meaning.
Impressive...
I like!

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2 posted 2008-12-29 11:44 AM


http://www.guardian.co.uk/commentisfree/2008/dec/29/israel-gaza-attack-palestinian-reaction
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3 posted 2008-12-29 04:03 PM


TY again Jennifer.

You choose your few words well in this poem.

Thank you.

P

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4 posted 2009-01-01 10:02 PM


The whole thing is just sick!  I guess religious wars will go on long after I am gone I am afraid.
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5 posted 2009-01-01 10:05 PM


No escape is right.  Everybody can be made to behave this way, dear.

Life's short.  Think hard!
Me!

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6 posted 2009-01-01 10:37 PM


Interesting comment, Kevin. I'd like to think I wouldn't, but maybe I'm just being naive.

[This message has been edited by JenniferMaxwell (01-02-2009 12:10 AM).]

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7 posted 2009-01-09 10:45 AM


this is amazing and i agree this is small but amazing!


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8 posted 2009-04-20 05:46 PM


smiling wide

I came typing after you yanno, and so glad I did...

The brevity works so well--hell, it all works so well.

Would that poetry were a scalpel.


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9 posted 2009-04-20 08:19 PM


Huggies right back, Karen. So nice to see your name on the blue pages again. You've been missed!
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