Dark Poetry #5 |
Comfort toys |
littlemonster Junior Member
since 2010-05-06
Posts 39UK |
Teddy won’t make it better. Dolly can’t make it better. Both have outgrown their keeper Not keeper them. Strangled the life out of them, asphyxiated by devoted hands. Fur only useful as a coat. Teddy use to make it better. Dolly was good at making it better. Bystanders of a different era life has outgrown them Not them life. Their conception of real, true love only diminished with the theory and pain of having to grow up. Teddy. Dolly. You can’t make it better now Both let out into the cold. She’s on her own. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Very touching and well told. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Ah, I too wish that darn Teddy could make it better....but alas, We've both outgrown each other. Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Such a deliciously sad poem. I love it, skilfully done. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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