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rebel~angel
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since 2006-06-20
Posts 71
Iowa USA

0 posted 2010-11-18 03:32 PM


Spinning
on a needle's edge.
One point
in the fabric of time.
Unable to fine
where I belong.
Connect-the-dots,
but the dots are all gone.
Twirling
through a field of tall grass.
Hair swirling,
and sun wrapping it's warmth
around--
then I step on a stone,
razor-sharp and bone-deep.
What I thought was all true
has gone through diffusion.
The illusion is shattered
like a mirror on the floor.
Seven years of bad luck,
but the luck gone before.

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2010-12-28 09:03 AM


Definitely awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2010-12-29 06:38 PM


Wanted to re-read this because it helps me comprehend the words better when I do. I knew it was good, now I know it's great! Just can't say why, I'm no poet, hahahahahah! Oh, and by the way, just popped in on your photography blog- truly impressive stuff. You have a great eye for imagery. So, I became a follower just to keep up with what you're on to. Great talents you have and they are appreciated!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Stitches
Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
United Kingdom
3 posted 2011-01-17 04:19 PM


Epic imagery.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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