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Birds Keep Flying
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Birds Keep Flying |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I gaze at sunlight on the table absently, but birds keep flying between the sun and the windowpane. Like time-lapse photography their tabletop silhouettes flit past and are gone. These are songbirds, not hawks, vultures condors, or geese. It's hard for some people to admit they were fooled. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
It's beautiful, with an interesting twist at the end. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Thx 4 teh kind words... It is a description of this website, as there are some easily fooled and somewhat "Net vicious" ppl here. |
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littlemonster Junior Member
since 2010-05-06
Posts 39UK |
Your words beautifully roll off the tongue and yet manage to leave a sense of pointed sadness. I love it. |
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incwrite Member
since 2010-12-31
Posts 55new york |
so very well described |
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