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Straight Down |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
The feeling returns You know it too well You pull the trigger And head straight to hell Voices you hear them They scream in your head We are you re demons! And we want you dead! We'll drag you to hell For permanent pain In everlasting torture Til your spirit we've slain Your mind must be broken And bones must be shattered Your will must be bent And your clothing tattered Once you are broken Far beyond repair We will take you to him His face you must bear May he be pleased Then mercy he'll give If hes not angry Maybe you'll live Alas your luck Is not on your side Your vision is slipping Hang on for the ride Your twisted captors Oh they return To take any shreds Of the peace you yearn Dancing demons They laugh and they taunt They rip at your soul And in your thoughts they haunt You feel as if falling You let out a scream Oh how you wish That yourself you'd redeem They mimic and cry You're being torn to shreds Your arms and your legs Different hues of red We won't let you go Forever our prey Our eternal guest Please enjoy your stay You hit ground hard And silent you lay You surrender your heart So here you shall stay You feel life slipping You hear cheers You squeeze your eyes Down your cheeks roll tears You feel him He draws near He whispers silently only for you Another soul mine my dear You hear the truth You're truly gone This is your home Where you've passed on Hell for good No where to run You'll face heat Hot as the sun Your only companions You met at the start Your demon captors Will never depart |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Excellent good job. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Swisha Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32 |
I really like how it flows so well and is short and sweet with each verse. Great write! |
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Britt_Brat Junior Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 37Knoxville, TN |
this has a nice flow Lost & wondering till I'm found |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This sounds like one of the poems I have written, but this is better. I loved it, great job |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
thanks so much everyone  it means alot to read your replies |
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