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FloraScars
Junior Member
since 2010-11-08
Posts 33
VA, USA

0 posted 2010-12-11 01:44 AM


i just wrote this one today.
12/11/10


I watch through a veil
I yearn to touch you
Forever I'm stuck roaming this trail
Wondering what to do

My silent tears fall
I see you alive and well
But I lay here in a ball
You're sad, I can tell

I touch the glass
That divides your world from mine
My time in your world ended fast
Just when I thought everything was fine

I still see you cry
Every night you write letters to me
Ending every one with a sigh
I wish you weren't there to see

There's no way to change that night
When I breathed my last breath
Falling from that insane height
Down to my death  

"Love is a dance. Some have it easy and others struggle."

© Copyright 2010 Flora Papadimitriou - All Rights Reserved
bigthinker8
Junior Member
since 2010-11-22
Posts 19
Chicago Il
1 posted 2010-12-13 11:02 AM


I can not tell you how much this touched me. I never thought of it from his point of view (my nephew) as I am so caught up in my own grief. Thank you so much.
FloraScars
Junior Member
since 2010-11-08
Posts 33
VA, USA
2 posted 2010-12-13 07:57 PM


aww thank you(: im glad you liked it(:
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