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The Soulless One
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The Soulless One |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Look into the eyes Of the man with no soul Used up and abandoned Forced to pay the toll For the treachery of life And the love that you stole Left with only his thoughts Spinning out of control Torture and agony Is all that he’ll feel Comfort and kindness They seem so unreal The walls he has built Are of concrete and steel No longer possessing A heart to conceal I know not joy I have no fun I feel no warmth I see no sun Alone I stand Alone I run I simply am The soulless one What was it that brought him To such a sad state The choices he’s made Or maddening fate Will someone now help him Perhaps it’s too late For he’s lost all his patience No more will he wait Along this dark path Alone he will be With no one to guide him Nor light he can see Battered and broken By life’s misery This is the man Which dwells within me I know not joy I have no fun I feel no warmth I see no sun Alone I stand Alone I run I simply am The soulless one G. A. Webb 11-29-10 Regret not that which you have done, |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
This flows wonderfully. quote: I've often wondered this about myself. Well written. -Trina. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.  |
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FloraScars Junior Member
since 2010-11-08
Posts 33VA, USA |
this is amazing the moment i began to read it i just felt so into the poem! |
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Weeping willow Junior Member
since 2010-08-29
Posts 13Mississippi |
This is a sad poem,but I relate to it so well.Each line is filled with emotions. Good write,continue writing as it helps heal the soul. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you both, I'm glad you liked this piece. These thoughts popped into my head one day at lunch so I had to write them down. I don't write nearly as much as I used to when I first joined PIP Talk way back when, so it feels good to do it again. Thanks again. Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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rachel_anubis Junior Member
since 2011-03-24
Posts 43 |
Amazingly emotive poem with such a sad story. I loved this. |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
i hope its not too late to be your friend...  i loved your poem.. and oh you're not alone, God's always with you... thanks for sharing |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
amazing i can somehow relate to it |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
I like how the poem has flowed. There is darkness, there is light but its the way you look at things that will make everything all right its all in your sight  do see it right! |
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