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Chavo.wavo Junior Member
since 2010-11-13
Posts 15 |
If only u could see the way she looks to me. her hair drops over her face and she waits in that one place I stroll toward her, smiling with glee until she looks at me she looks upset so i ask whats wrong even though i knew the answer all along she tells me she doesn't love me and she runs and leaves me at the tree the tree we first met though the rain made us wet we were so happy that day but now she went away I looked at the tree, and jumped with a start because there embedded in the tree, was our heart [This message has been edited by Chavo.wavo (11-26-2010 01:13 PM).] |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
That is a beautiful poem. Really really good. I think that the endings of poems should make them, and your did that exactly. Very touching and compelling poem. |
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Desirer4New Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art |
wow i have scrolled through and read a couple of your writes. they are very good. some of the things your writing about i can really relate to. its not very common to hear or read something that your thinking to yourself. i really liked reading your writes.  |
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