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chylenedoney
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since 2010-10-14
Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2010-10-14 05:34 PM



Breathing In
By Teal    Doney

Breathing in
It starts to hurt
I cry inside
Can’t be heard

Breathing in
My vision blurs
A single tear
My words; just slurs

Breathing in
So fast and quick
My world turns black
Down goes my candlestick

Breathing in
Exhaling out
The pain will never fade
That’s what the crying is about.

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Karleygirl
Junior Member
since 2010-08-05
Posts 20

1 posted 2010-10-14 10:20 PM


Is your sistler paralized?
chylenedoney
Junior Member
since 2010-10-14
Posts 27
Idaho, USA
2 posted 2010-10-18 05:05 PM


no she just wrote this poem after my mom got drunk and tried to strangle her.

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2011-02-01 01:10 AM


It makes me sad to hear that this is from a true perspective. But I am thankful to have seen it because it holds such great meaning.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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