Dark Poetry #5 |
my sisters world |
chylenedoney Junior Member
since 2010-10-14
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
Breathing In By Teal Doney Breathing in It starts to hurt I cry inside Can’t be heard Breathing in My vision blurs A single tear My words; just slurs Breathing in So fast and quick My world turns black Down goes my candlestick Breathing in Exhaling out The pain will never fade That’s what the crying is about. |
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Karleygirl Junior Member
since 2010-08-05
Posts 20 |
Is your sistler paralized? |
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chylenedoney Junior Member
since 2010-10-14
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
no she just wrote this poem after my mom got drunk and tried to strangle her. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
It makes me sad to hear that this is from a true perspective. But I am thankful to have seen it because it holds such great meaning. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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