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Nothing is Free. |
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abhursty Junior Member
since 2009-02-25
Posts 45 |
Nothing is Free. Never trust Never cry Always ache Never die. Lose it all No one cares Open your eyes No one's there. Hold your breath Take a dive Your last love Left you dead inside. You harm yourself Hoping someone will see Bleed your heart dry They leave you be. Scream in your sleep Thrash and cry Snap awake And only sigh. Take a knife See red Say goodbye And now you're dead. People mourn You cry From your cage Between the sky. I wrote this both about my friend and myself. I sort of backtracked when I wrote it. Anyway, I'm not much into blabbing about my stuff so post comments and all the jazz. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Bleak, but I can sympathize. |
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Swisha Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32 |
Hold your breath Take a dive Your last love Left you dead inside. -- I really really liked that part. I can personally relate to that. I enjoyed the whole write though, but especially that part. |
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Pixie Wales Junior Member
since 2010-07-29
Posts 21UK |
Hi abhursty! I commend you for putting this up - I can completely relate to this piece and think that you have said it brilliantly! I look forward to reading more. Wishing you the very best, Pixie Wales |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
People mourn You cry From your cage Between the sky I like this bit....this is so - to the point. Nice. There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy |
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