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Eterne
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since 2010-07-21
Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2010-07-22 12:19 PM


your laughter
crisp like a winter morning
sunlight in your eyes
warming my face
ravenous lips and fingers
searching my body
all over again
an exclamation of happiness
suspended
above my bed

your laughter


scream
long and silent
mouth grasping for air
the blue moon's light
above the black sea
of my despair

your laughter


Eterne
February 2010
http://eterne-es.blogspot.com/



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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2010-07-22 07:51 PM


I really like the contrast between both stanza's. I think i'll store this one in my library.

Nice write.


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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Eterne
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since 2010-07-21
Posts 75
Quebec, Canada
2 posted 2010-07-22 10:49 PM


Thank you!
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2010-10-08 01:05 AM


Nice.Great write.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

Eterne
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since 2010-07-21
Posts 75
Quebec, Canada
4 posted 2010-10-09 06:59 PM


Thank you, s1nfully_1nn0c3nt!
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