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frail
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since 2008-05-04
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0 posted 2009-01-14 04:35 AM


Sitting in the darkest of my room,
Beside a bottle of tequila.
Across the window,
Looking straight at the light
Stars share tonight.
Watching over the crescent moon,
The reflection of my broken own.

Looking into the mirror,
Where all I see's your face.
It's been haunting me for years,
I see your your painful smile
When I look into my eyes.

Your weakness caused me pain,
My whole life was in your hands.
And now that you're gone,
Do I really have a reason to stay?

Lost in the depths of loneliness,
Sank in the land of pain and tears
Been wandering through the ocean of sorrow
Where all I do is grief.

No one ever noticed it when I'm gone,
No one ever noticed it when I'm gone,
No one ever noticed it when I'm gone, gone, gone

I'm not alone,
I am with my self.

I'm not alone,
Just spending a time with my own.

I'm not alone,
I wish I wasn't...

When love turned out to be hatred,
How do you remember the sweetest past?
Where love and hatred collides,
How do you embrace nicest memories?

I wish I wasn't alone...


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frail
Junior Member
since 2008-05-04
Posts 12

1 posted 2009-01-14 04:44 AM


Dolour - intense sorrow caused by loss of a loved one (especially death)


XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2009-01-14 12:48 PM


I really like this, even though it's a very overwhelming feeling. I know how you feel. This is a really good write. I haven't been around for a while..seems like things have slowed down a bit.
But anyway, great write. I think i'll put this in my library.

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Emmalee Janelle
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