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Stitches
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since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
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0 posted 2010-04-21 03:17 PM


I long to feel the soil,
As I stand here in the dark-
Breathing for a vain god,
To maintain his petty spark.

I long to kiss the darkness
As I lay here in the cold,
Cursing at the timeline
To which I have been sold.

I long to embrace nothing,
Fall into Hades' bed
And feel eternal climax,
Of becoming whole, and dead.


'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

[This message has been edited by Stitches (04-22-2010 05:56 AM).]

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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
Posts 96

1 posted 2010-04-21 06:41 PM


the line eternal climax, then followed by of whole being dead,

interest contrast of ideas.

take care

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