Dark Poetry #5 |
Fulfilment |
Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
I long to feel the soil, As I stand here in the dark- Breathing for a vain god, To maintain his petty spark. I long to kiss the darkness As I lay here in the cold, Cursing at the timeline To which I have been sold. I long to embrace nothing, Fall into Hades' bed And feel eternal climax, Of becoming whole, and dead. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' [This message has been edited by Stitches (04-22-2010 05:56 AM).] |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
the line eternal climax, then followed by of whole being dead, interest contrast of ideas. take care |
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